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First Line Lab

First Line Lab

Wednesday 12th November

13:00 EST / 10:00 PST / 18:00 GMT

In this 60-minute live Zoom workshop, an editor will live-critique real first lines from the audience and explain, step by step, how to turn a flat opening into a page-turner.

What's included:

• 1h live workshop with teaching + live critiques

• Chance to have your first line edited and discussed live

• Recording access

Regular price £5.00
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Critique slots will be offered on a first-come, first-served basis from attendees who submit their lines after purchase. Even if your line isn’t chosen, you’ll learn exactly how to apply the same principles to your own work.

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First Line Lab
First Line Lab
Regular price £5.00
Regular price Sale price £5.00
Sale Sold out

FAQs

Common Questions

How do I submit my first line?

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Once you purchase a ticket, I'll send you a PDF with a link to submit your first line. I'm very excited to pass these on to the editor!

Can I attend without submitting a first line?

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Of course! Many writers come to workshops just to observe, take notes and learn from others’ examples.

Will my first line be safe from plagiarism?

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All attendees must tick a box agreeing not to copy or reproduce other participants’ writing. It’s a respectful, professional space for learning, not for borrowing ideas.

Every line shared is treated as your intellectual property. You keep full ownership and rights.

The live critiques are for educational purposes only, and we never publish or reuse anyone’s work without explicit permission.

Do I need to have my camera or mic on?

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Nope! You can join quietly, listen, and take notes. If your line is selected for a live critique, we’ll read it aloud. You don’t need to speak on camera unless you want to.

I can't do this time/date!

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If you buy a ticket, I'm going to email you a recording. We can review your line even if you don't attend.

Are refunds available?

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Tickets are non-refundable but you’ll still receive the replay and materials even if you can’t make it live.

Who’s running this?

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The session is hosted by School of Plot and led by Sithara, with live critiques from various editors, the first one being Jaume.